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light
Contributed by
electrique_poet
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:58:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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there on the ceiling
lighting the room
a clear bulb
in a flicker
and a pop
the light is no more
a turn
and a click
and there on the ceiling
lighting the room
a new clear bulb
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2004-12-02 15:58:05]
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Re: light
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:42:22 PM AEST
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Re: light
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by zenmind on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:36:51 PM AEST
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this reminds me of William Carlos William's style. You seem to be able to express that which cannot be spoken, yet can be illustrated in very ordinary, yet detailed descriptions. The feeling expressed is much beyond the words. wow
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