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A Walk In The Woods
Contributed by
Sinned
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:57:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Trees are bare
Branches reaching as if to grab
Here it is ths second of december
Skelton fingers ready to nab
A small finch still hanging around
A big o'l bluejay on the ground
Squriles scurry for a tree
Mans best friend along side of me
Walking trails that curve and twist
Freckles leash tugging at my wrist
I enjoy the freshness of the air
Morning dew and weather fair
Down a hill through some reeds
Leaving muddy tracks for others to see
Freckles sniffing at the ground
I listening for natures sound
I take this treck most everyday
It gives me pause to listen and pray
Be silent be still
Time to listen to His will
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Sinned
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2004-12-02 15:57:29]
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Re: A Walk In The Woods
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:45:18 PM AEST
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you are a generous person, i dont know many people who would spend a summer clearing trails. =]
excellent write. as it so happens i was on an overgrown trail today....or we were making a new trail.... |
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Re: A Walk In The Woods
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by aringb on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:12:07 AM AEST
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| Great poem. Like the line "skeleton fingers ready to nab". A few spelling errors, but otherwise great write. |
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Re: A Walk In The Woods
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 11:54:25 AM AEST
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Now, I like this entirely and can't disagree with a thing except some of your spelling. You took me to that place and, yes, that would be my quiet time with the Lord as well.
Stitch |
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