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Red Eyed Demons
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 02:26:30 PM in AEST
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They call out to me they want me,
Want me need me to set them free,
I tell them no, tell them I can’t,
As I know all they want to do is cause harm.
But I feel myself getting weaker as they call,
Temptation lives in me like a fiery ball,
I know that if I do set them free hell will have to be paid,
In a pool of my own blood I’ll have been laid.
Their screeching pierces my ears,
Makes me cry bloody tears,
I can’t keep a hold of my sanity when they are close,
Then they just disappear like a shadowy ghost.
I can see their eyes they are bloodshot & red,
That terrifying image will stay in my head,
For years I will suffer from terrors of the night,
Only the demons can hear my curdled plight.
I curl up trying to hide, hide far away,
Please tell the demons I don’t want to come out & play,
Haunted & scared is how I live my life,
Forever & eternity I sleep clutching my knife.
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Re: Red Eyed Demons
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by MMISS on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 02:31:03 PM AEST
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| real scary thoughts. keep up the good work! |
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Re: Red Eyed Demons
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 02:40:24 PM AEST
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Bloody hell i'm glad the doc put me on sleepers!
never sleep again if i read many more writes like this.
Be afraid ... be very afraid!
good work pix.
johnny |
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Re: Red Eyed Demons
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 02:46:55 PM AEST
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Wow Pixie this is scary.awsome.
hugs |
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Re: Red Eyed Demons
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:16:57 PM AEST
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| great write |
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Re: Red Eyed Demons
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:22:49 PM AEST
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x-cellent write my dear, as all of your poetry, I do love the way this one ends off , very dramatic :D!
Jenni xxoo |
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Re: Red Eyed Demons
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by LEMMEN on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:25:00 PM AEST
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This write is so close to my own personal life. The voices the visions the evil I hear within Great Job.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Red Eyed Demons
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:07:56 PM AEST
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"I can see their eyes they are bloodshot & red,
That terrifying image will stay in my head ... "
Wow, that sounds like me in the morning, before coffee.
Great write pixie. Try coffee on 'em, it soothes this stark raving beastie ... LOL
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Red Eyed Demons
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by givingin on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:36:44 AM AEST
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Wow, very scary pixie my dear,
this made my soul fill with fear.
Great work!
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Red Eyed Demons
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by Willofree on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 08:12:26 AM AEST
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Pixie, A powerful write.
.....one thing about our fears you know
we are actually the one in control
As much as we hate our bad thoughts to be
Turning them over to our savior can set us free
A great write, I think writing, like you are doing, is a good way to cope.
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Re: Red Eyed Demons
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by secretwind on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 10:38:17 PM AEST
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ha ha
your so sweetly evil
luv this.
The Wind.... |
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Re: Red Eyed Demons
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 07:51:23 AM AEST
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Wonder wat the were smoking??
Ya jus face your demons one at a time. Then one day you'll realize they're gone.
Awesome writing.
luv, huggs, faith,
emy |
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