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Peaking
Contributed by
aden6942
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 02:11:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Forced to wild desires
Driven to crazy things
Tamed are few and far
Incedible lust it brings
Leaving for greener grass
Traveling to finer pastures
The running bpm of life
Slows not for bad disasters
Taking every punch
Turning every cheek
Won't stop me loving
Getting to this peak
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Re: Peaking
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:48:59 PM AEST (User
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excellent write. written well. excellent rhythym. |
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