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Don't Let My Tears Fall
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:36:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My love don’t let my tears fall,
Cover my ears when my heartache calls,
Keep me warm wrapped up next to you,
Stop my heart from seeing the colour blue.
I found a place that I want to be,
How I love to curl up on your knee,
Wrap my arms around your neck & hold,
Watch the love in your eyes unfold.
All I ask is that you love me right through the ages,
Free me from life’s many cages,
Caress my naked skin with your undying love,
Our bodies fit together like hand & glove.
Dry my eyes if tears spill out when I cry
Please hold me until the day we both die,
Never leave my side we belong as one,
Hold my hand as we walk towards the sun.
To feel the love come off you in reams,
Makes me start to live all of my dreams,
Our love is one that can’t be broken,
Our love is a language which is as powerful unspoken.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-02 10:36:32]
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Re: Don't Let My Tears Fall
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:39:57 AM AEST
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great write...
awaiting ur next
~Jishes~ |
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Re: Don't Let My Tears Fall
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 11:09:48 AM AEST
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great write once again.
Johnny. |
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Re: Don't Let My Tears Fall
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 11:29:37 AM AEST
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Awww, hun.
This is so sweet, and I know he won't let them fall.
I loved every line off this.
Another great write, hun.
*hugs*
Phil xxx
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Re: Don't Let My Tears Fall
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by daydreamer22 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 11:33:07 AM AEST
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awww...how sweet...nicely done...
Awaiting your next...
~*ME*~ |
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Re: Don't Let My Tears Fall
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by Baronhawk on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 11:33:13 AM AEST
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Ha ha I just had a crazy moment and I just felt inspired to add this as commentary to your poem.
"Your tears shall never fall
this is a promise
to which I hold
I shall ever dam it all
with the softest kisses
and the sweetest
whispers of love".
~Baronhawk.
From an unspoken conversation in my head that I maybe should have used..oh well it was a long time ago and it will never come again..I just thought it was a fitting commentary to your poetry. Your poem here really brings me back to a time long ago...what a trip down memory lane...though the situation is somewhat different I was faced with a person hurt before and is afraid to trust again and being myself unworldly in the affairs of love hesitated to act with the caring and grace that was required. |
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Re: Don't Let My Tears Fall
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:14:54 PM AEST
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| this is so beautiful pixie i love it and i am glad to see its happy |
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Re: Don't Let My Tears Fall
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:34:38 PM AEST
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Awww so sweet and beautiful.
great job pixie dear. :)
hugs |
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Re: Don't Let My Tears Fall
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by julieh on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:49:28 PM AEST
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| This is so lovely i really enjoyed it, thanks jux |
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Re: Don't Let My Tears Fall
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 01:48:49 PM AEST
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Pixie this is such an amazing write, i really do enjoy your work. Keep them coming.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Don't Let My Tears Fall
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 02:14:48 PM AEST
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| great as usual pixilator..write something sucky for a change..LOL. |
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Re: Don't Let My Tears Fall
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by Renstar on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 02:56:47 PM AEST
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| good stuff, pixie i really liked it:) |
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Re: Don't Let My Tears Fall
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 08:05:37 AM AEST
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Very beautifull masterpeice!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Don't Let My Tears Fall
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by justjonesy on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:36:32 PM AEST
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| its getting hard to write good comments when every one of your poems is great....haha...im running out of good things to say....well anyways...great job as always |
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