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Remember
Contributed by
Dominick-destruction
on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 09:05:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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To Dream in Nostalgia..
whilst wrapped in the Velvet blanket of Night,
To Hear those lost Songs of old played again Beneath A desert Moon…
To Remember Gentle breaths leaving delicately parted Lips..
Of the Feel of skin under my finger tips.
Of tendrils of sweetly perfumed hair..
Cascading like an Auburn waterfall Over a pillow.
Of mouths Wet with passion & lust…
Of tongues Dancing in our mouths…
Sliding & twisting like serpents in the dead, dead of night.
Of limbs wrapped around each other…
Hearts beating together.
Of you blooming Like a most precious & rare flower...
Of living eternity within that one moment.
Of the safety & warmness that was you…
..O, how I miss that feeling…
……But remember it; I do….
(c) Dominick Destruction 2/12/04
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2004-12-02 09:05:01]
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Re: Remember
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by MMISS on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 09:09:47 AM AEST
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| excellent in my book! love your write. you have a great imagination. |
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Re: Remember
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by alexb on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 09:11:39 AM AEST
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| beautifully written. you have a great way of putting the picture in my head, great write |
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Re: Remember
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by faffeee on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:16:43 AM AEST
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| i love this!!! its so true and beautiful, the imagery is amazing. and i love the last two lines - a perfect ending to a wonderful poem. :) katie xx |
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