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I Know You Hurt
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:44:39 AM in AEST
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I know you hurt & I hate it so,
I hate seeing you suffer your daily blow,
Another day has past without your kids,
On your feelings you’ve tried to shut the lid.
I can’t do anything to help you at all,
Only to watch your heart suffer another fall,
I try to understand how you must feel,
As I am not motherly, but to you the heartaches real.
I feel bad that I can’t appreciate your pain,
All I do is see you go through it again,
I wish I could cuddle away all your hurt,
Stop your love & feelings from being burnt.
You are scared April will grow up without you,
You think she’s forgotten you which makes you blue,
You think about her while you lay there in bed,
Painful memories dance about in your head.
I really want to feel like you but I never will,
As in me there is no parental love to spill,
I am sorry that I can’t help you anymore,
All I want is to stop your heart feeling sore.
You close up like a winter flower,
Feeling like you have lost all your Daddy power,
I know you long to hold her in your loving arms,
Your daughter is your lifetime of lucky charms.
I feel so sad as you are such a wonderful man,
I know to see her you’ll do all you can,
Please know that I’ll be here forever by your side,
It hurts me to know that for your pain you have cried.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-02 07:44:39]
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Re: I Know You Hurt
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:48:43 AM AEST
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One things for sure pix, least he knows you are there to support him. Which is the only thing you can do during these difficult times.
Johnny. |
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Re: I Know You Hurt
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by Live2Die on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 08:06:02 AM AEST
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| This is such a sad poem. I wish there was a magic wand we could use to just take away our closest friends pain when they need it...or that we could just take it upon ourselves and give them a break. It is a great write....expressed wonderfully....I hope this Daddy figure gets to see his daughter. Sets me wondering if MY father ever thought like that....felt like that....of ever regretted his mistakes....who knows. who cares? I don't. But I feel bad for this person. =( |
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Re: I Know You Hurt
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by givingin on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 08:28:07 AM AEST
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awww, very sad,
good write.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: I Know You Hurt
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by MMISS on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 08:50:34 AM AEST
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pixie,this is a great story and i can relate!
and someday this dad wiil be with his child again. children always return to the parent who loves them. at least that's what i believe. |
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Re: I Know You Hurt
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by Renstar on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:04:03 PM AEST
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| awww, i hope this father gets to be with his daughter soon i know what its like, my brothers ex wife took off with his daughter and didnt know where they were it was hard to find the words to console him...but everything is ok , he has his daughter now and new wife and son...:)i hope the same happens for this father..great write pixie:) |
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