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stare
Contributed by
karmen
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:22:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Do you love me?
Do you care?
If you don’t,
then why do you stare?
Yes, I notice you,
looking at me.
Your eyes look so loving,
it’s easy to see.
So tell me now and tell me now,
and tell me true.
Let me know, do you love me?
cause I love you.
Of all the guys,
I’ve ever met,
your the most perfect,
and I won’t forget.
It’s ok that you stare,
I don’t mind.
Your to sweet,
it has to be love of some kind.
I’ll be here waiting,
just for you to tell me,
I love you,
I know it will happen, just wait and see....
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karmen
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2004-12-02 00:22:38]
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Re: stare
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by emystar on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:27:11 AM AEST
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Very good write.
good luck.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: stare
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by Dragontear27 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:37:11 AM AEST
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| Nice write it doesn't flow as good as your other one did but still good. ~~lates~~ |
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Re: stare
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:45:49 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, I hope he tells you soon :o)
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: stare
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:39:24 PM AEST
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| Hey, I can relate to this so very well, its really cool tho, I like this poem alot i enjoyed reading it, Very Good Write, I hope he loves you in the end lol Good Luck~!! |
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