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dead
Contributed by
karmen
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:18:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel dead to the world,
dead to myself.
I am just another face in the crowd.
Another person,
waiting to die.
Just another loser,
put down by everyone around.
I’m just another child,
who’s father left her side.
I fly but fall,
fight but fail.
I’m worthless,
I’m no one.
I scream, but no one hears.
I cry, but no one sees.
I want to get out of this place.
I’m tired of all the pain,
all the yelling,
all the tears.
Copyright ©
karmen
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2004-12-02 00:18:19]
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Re: dead
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by Dragontear27 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:33:15 AM AEST
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| I'm glad i'm not the only one that feels that way. the poem i just wrote on here "The Butterfly Effect" is kinda like this one also another one I wrote awile back is like this one as well. I could and should try to make you feel better but I myself know what it feels like...to well.... feel that way. Very good emotional expression atleast I think it is because I know exaclty how you feel, all to well. Or maybe you don't feel this way at all maybe it's just a poem you thought of, but in any case wonderful write. ~~lates~~ |
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Re: dead
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:47:45 AM AEST
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Brilliantly written. I think we've all been there at some point, and alot of us still are. I hope you feel better some time soon.
Take Care
- Becca |
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