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in love
Contributed by
karmen
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:14:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Just knowing you are happy, makes me feel happy too.
And when you're feeling down and out, my mood is also blue.
When you smile it lights my heart, your laugh to me is pure bliss.
I feel complete in your presence, nobody's ever touched my heart like this.
I’d do anything in my power for you, even sacrifice my own life.
If my death would mean your safety, I’d offer my heart to the knife.
Too many times I’ve felt alone, but with you I forget what's its like to be lonely.
Your the center of my world, all that I need, your my one and only.
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karmen
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2004-12-02 00:14:05]
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Re: in love
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by Dragontear27 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:42:54 AM AEST
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| This one had nice flow plus a short sweet and to the point. Just some advice from past experiences..ummm don't get to.....obsessed in one person because if they hurt you somehow it can leave a big emotional scar in your life, and you might not wanna trust people all that well again. So Just a suggestion...juss trying to help. ~~lates~~ |
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Re: in love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:52:12 AM AEST
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Absolutely Beautiful. Very well written, thanks for sharing :o)
Take Care
- Becca |
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