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Mona Lisa of God
Contributed by
Shamim
on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Poignant it is for your ears though,
But man is the Mona Lisa of God.
In six days perceived and drawn
Then automated to follow the cord.
Meticulous job one should say
Those four elements to form clay
Which never seemed to agree with each other
In one body soundly fray.
The touch of life on human beings
Was the artistic wrong ever done,
Upon this the ‘sea of faith’ fate and flaws
Give me but a mistake, only one.
Detaching from self now wants back
Setting a path dreary and lost
Oh! Call everyman unlucky, and victims
The gamble is one-sided, so huge is the cost.
Hamlet the man was not spared
Oedipus the king was victimized too
All the laws in his hands made and set
Man, is but what to do?
Macbeth for his ambition so high
Othello for his blind belief
Love is such a corrupting game
Truly none has ever escaped its grief.
But, should you ask who to blame?
Man or God? For both are same
One the carrier, later the load
A part of whom through the former came.
Keeping the knowledge of future, birth and death
Gave a wild will and a sound tact, within a plot;
In single thought everything occurs
While the mortals travel with shadowy snot.
That too devised by Him to distract
From the already thinning path, Oh! Mercy
What monopoly is this upon man?
What match for you can they be?
Vinci’s Mona Lisa sprung from a mistake
Reflecting so much it hides him too
The smile it wears abides strange melancholy
God’s man has these traits too.
Copyright ©
Shamim
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2002-11-25 04:00:00]
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Re: Mona Lisa of God
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by OreO on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 04:02:22 AM AEST
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Well this was definately differrent
Thanks for sharing this one it gives
alot of vision and the wording is
astonishingly beautiful.
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Re: Mona Lisa of God
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 05:01:27 AM AEST
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Interestingly beautiful....
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