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Trapped
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
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Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:57:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Running down the hallway
Trying to find the end
But never being successful
She hates the fact that she's trapped
Trapped inside this place
This place of total darkness
She can't stand it here
But can't find a way out
She doesn't know what to do
She tries calling out for help
But no one hears her cries
She's starting to get scared now
What if she's never found
Tears start to form in her eyes
She wants so much to just be home
To lay in her warm bed and go to sleep
But she's trapped inside this horrid place
She starts to see light
And runs faster then ever before
Hoping beyond hope she'll finally be released from this place
But the light begins to fade
And she's in total darkness again
Trapped in this place
With no hope of a way out
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jishes_4_ever
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2004-12-01 22:57:22]
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Re: Trapped
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:19:28 AM AEST
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I hope that one day you will find your way out and feel happy and free, this was amazingly composed,
pixie xx |
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Re: Trapped
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:38:54 PM AEST
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| its a well written poem, i like the ending and suspense in it, great job! |
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