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Earthbound angels
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:43:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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New beginnings through all the painful ends
the night sky fading to let the sun rising in
pasts are gone
dreams becoming reality
us as earthbound angels grew our wings
we fly to our happy endings
where in the place we belong is good things
soaring over time and space
everything comes to peace
and with our wings we fly away so happily
Peace and hope
JENNI
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Re: Earthbound angels
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by UnlovedChild on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:46:33 PM AEST
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| Aww Jenni,simple, short and sweet. I love it. It is so true and peaceful knowing what to look forward to. Great job! Keep it up. Love ya! |
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Re: Earthbound angels
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:52:57 PM AEST
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this is a heavenly beautifull masterpeice.
Awesome write my dear friend.
luv, huggs, smiles,
peace, hope, joy,
emy |
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Re: Earthbound angels
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:16:25 PM AEST
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| simply beautiful..very good expression of love of two united hearts god bless:-) venkat |
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Re: Earthbound angels
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by hot-shot on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:30:32 AM AEST
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oh my friend you have written very beautifully.
ur poem is simple, nice & beautiful
hmmm....hav fun
hot-shot |
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Re: Earthbound angels
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by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:20:00 AM AEST
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this is beautiful Jenni, really beautiful.. well written,
pixie xx |
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Re: Earthbound angels
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by DieRomantic on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 06:08:04 PM AEST
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| the second stanza is the best, but the whole thing is absolutely amazing. =] very lovely. i like your style of poetry. |
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Re: Earthbound angels
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 10:48:58 AM AEST
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How delightful this poem is so beautifuly senitive and airy. Like a delicate watercolor painting that fills one's heart with hope. Quite
lovely.
Ben |
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