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Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed.
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
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Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:40:24 PM in AEST
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These old fingers just won't work tonight.
My brain is rotted out, just for today.
Nothing comes to mind to write,
No love, no hate, nothing and nothing.
An endless sea of ravings and madness,
Lost under a sky of senselessness.
I wander thru thoughts and meanings, waiting for responses.
This is the thing I hate most,
Wanting it to come out of you, a million miles an hour;
But it won't, it refuses to be controlled.
Sifting thru my day, I find nothing of interest.
Not to write with, just for reflection.
This is the only way to conquer it though,
To write, to let it pass.
Later on though, you'll see,
I will have created something to envy,
And you'll be sorry you neglected to bother with this dribble.
Because you won't know about the masterpeice to come.
Copyright ©
deadreckoning1983
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2004-12-01 22:40:24]
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Re: Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed.
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:58:53 PM AEST
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Little flows from your pen Dean, that is less than exceptional. This included.
Hope the block has been lifted.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed.
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:12:58 PM AEST
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very well done and up theirs if they dont read or comment each word is a masterpiece
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Re: Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed.
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:38:02 PM AEST
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You are making me laugh again,
you sly SOB!
Groovy.
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Re: Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed.
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:02:51 PM AEST
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Dane, this was awesome...And you're right, someday, you'll show 'em all...I thought this was quite the masterpiece though
Mason |
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Re: Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed.
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by Rxqueen on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:34:11 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel, somedays I want to get something out,I don't know whta, but I feel the urge... but it never comes. I liked this one. Good write, it was nery climatic. I didn't know where it was going, good ending. |
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Re: Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed.
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 3rd November 2014 @ 02:04:52 PM AEST
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That author's note made me laugh:)
So, at what point while writing this did you realize you were in fact, writing? Us writers are tough on ourselves...Are we all emotional spazzes? Yes! Yes, we are. How great is that ending...It stings, but I thought you were a crab? :)
~Scorp |
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