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we both die
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 09:39:59 PM in AEST
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We Both Die
Drowning in this.
Cant see through this.
Out of everyone who called your name.
Out of everyone you caused this pain.
It was me who knew,
Your sickness overwhelming.
You needed someone to talk to.
You shut me out again.
I promised you.
You said you wouldn't.
Where was I when you needed me.
I wouldn't have made a difference.
You took your life.
It's my fault.
We both die.
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Re: we both die
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:05:23 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. needs some gaps filled so it makes more sense to the reader though. |
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Re: we both die
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by Chanti on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:44:02 PM AEST
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Great write, i liked it.
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Re: we both die
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by n2dep2care on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:06:55 PM AEST
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Solemn and endearing. Really wonderful write.
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