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Concealed Words
Contributed by
Dragontear27
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Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 09:07:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Unspoken words of those to shy
will lead to a life of malice
never knowing what would have happened
if those words were only released
lives are changed by the words we do not speak
afraid of the outcome of those words
we hide them away and let our mind do the talking
so once our mind let's it out
your stuck with nothing to say
the chance is gone
so why keep in what you want to say
just speak the words of you mind
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Dragontear27
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2004-12-01 21:07:54]
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Re: Concealed Words
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by shattered_heart on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 09:11:48 PM AEST
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Makes you think about how things that you hide and don't say could affect someone. Good write.
- Rachelle |
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Re: Concealed Words
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 09:12:33 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. sometimes its best with judgement to speak what you feel or think or just hold it in. |
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Re: Concealed Words
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by daydreamer22 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 09:53:49 PM AEST
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good write...you should always say what is on your mind...its not healthy to keep it bottled up for too long...
Awaiting your next...
~*ME*~
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