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I Thought He Never Saw Me
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 07:29:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Teardrops hit the floor
As I cry in the dark
"Why doesn't he see me?"
I whisper to nothingness
He doesn't see me.
He never saw me.
Hope pours from my body
Lying limp and curled on the floor
Racking with sobs
Wishing he was there
To fix me
But...
He doesn't see me.
He never saw me.
I feel so alone.
I wan't to die.
I lift the blade up
Over my head
Down down it goes
I count the seconds
The blade clatters to the floor.
He is there!
His hands clenched around mine
I look twice
Are those tears in his eyes?
He sobs quietly and then...
Wraps his arms around me
Tightly, like he was afraid I would disappear
He whispers so soft
But I heard him loud and clear
"I always saw you."
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Re: I Thought He Never Saw Me
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by waos on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:07:02 PM AEST
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aww....so sweet.... the ending was of course my favorite part. i've always dreamed of someone taking me into their arms and just yeah...
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Re: I Thought He Never Saw Me
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by WildfireRose on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:27:14 PM AEST
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| wow..that made me cry...I know mine doesn't see me...hope you have a good day |
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Re: I Thought He Never Saw Me
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by Chanti on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:42:29 PM AEST
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aw... beautiful write... so tragic
-Chanti |
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Re: I Thought He Never Saw Me
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:19:20 AM AEST
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aww... this was so sweet... great write...
~!*!~hugs~!*!~
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: I Thought He Never Saw Me
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by hauntedangel on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 06:51:55 AM AEST
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wow that was great awsome omg i cried i wish my guy culd see me, but he never notices im here 4 him well done ur poem is beautiful i loved it
cyaz
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Re: I Thought He Never Saw Me
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 11:43:16 AM AEST
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This was really good.. I liked it alot.. It was sad..
take care
christina |
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