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Missing You
Contributed by
Smooth
on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Whispered breeze hear my song, singing in your ear,
Dieing stars feel my breath lifting all your fear,
Look inside, deep within until it all is clear,
Hold on tight, the grip of life, till you feel me near.
Smooth
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Smooth
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2002-11-25 01:00:00]
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Re: Missing You
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 03:56:45 AM AEST
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My favorite line in this write is
Dieing stars feel my breath lifting
all your fear...That's absolutely
breathtaking, Thanks for sharing
this one i enjoyed reading it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Missing You
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by Sarah22 on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 12:19:04 AM AEST
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amazing work
on this poem
it was so breath
taking and great
to read ciao :*). |
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