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All The Qualities Of A Failing Heart
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
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Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 04:35:19 PM in AEST
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(start spoken)
Payment should be painful
I can bleed
I can love
I can breath
I can die
But my love is like nothing
It's hopeless
(verse 1...screaming/singing)
I'm effing hopeless
A failure
A dying heart not able
To be jolted awake
With volts of emotion
Just to prove I'm hopeless
Chorus
Bleeding through every source
Hopeless, falling, romantic
I'd ask for your hand
But I'm out of reach
Bridge(spoken, parentheses screamed)
I can bleed (bleed)
I can love (love)
I can breath (breath)
I can die (love)
Verse 2
Hanging shattered hopes out to dry
My hopes
Shattered by bullets
From my gun
The blood soaked my shirt
And clotted into your name
So at least I went down in style
Bridge (2 times)
I can bleed (bleed)
I can love (love)
I can breath (breath)
I can die (love)
Bleeding through every source
Hopeless, falling, romantic
I'd ask for your hand
But I'm out of reach
I can love...(repeat until song ends, fading slowly)
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eyesxcriedxout1989
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2004-12-01 16:35:19]
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Re: All The Qualities Of A Failing Heart
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 04:43:02 PM AEST
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I'm impressed again.
This is cool,
and song lyrics often seem
to lack that freshness
that cool poems have.
This will be good,
I'm looking forward to more,
and the reaction you get.
--Mothy |
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Re: All The Qualities Of A Failing Heart
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 05:19:41 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this, This is so cool, it was very deep!! Great Song !!!!!!!! |
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Re: All The Qualities Of A Failing Heart
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 09:55:12 PM AEST
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| excellent right mason, you never cease to impress. you right with a passion and fire that should be beyond you, but somehow you grasp the deep concepts of love, pain and life so well for being so young!!!!!!!! i love what you do, you are an inspiration to me. |
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Re: All The Qualities Of A Failing Heart
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by kisser89 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:33:40 PM AEST
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| very cool, makes me wish i could really hear it, keep it up |
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Re: All The Qualities Of A Failing Heart
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 05:01:08 PM AEST
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dude mason..that was awesome..your talented man.. =]
Kaylee |
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