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Gaurdian
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 04:27:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Darkness comes on swiftly slinking feet
Shadows dance across your sad face.
As I watch you walk away
A thought comes to mind,
"What will become of me once you are gone?
Will I die? Or just lie upon my bed and cry?"
I miss you already. So do you really have to go?
We could sneek off....
Or you could just ignore her threat.
Then take with you this thought
I say aloud my last words to him
"I love you."
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2004-12-01 16:27:18]
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Re: Gaurdian
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by Oriana on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 05:30:47 PM AEST
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*dabs eyes with tissue* That's bittersweet but super. I think it's wrong that his mom made you guys break up. *shakes head* that don't seem right. Anyway *gives you a cookie and rose* I hope things work out for ya in the long run. ^_^
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Re: Gaurdian
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 11:13:24 PM AEST
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| very good poem. |
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