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my wonderland and guardian angels

Contributed by little_genna on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 04:02:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry






I walk through my wonderland,
How much of this can you stand?
I need to get out of this never ending fairy tale,
Where I always feel like I am on trial.
Looked upon as if I am insane,
When in fact I am just in pain.
My wonderland is dark and dangerous
Coming into my world may end up disastrous.

This isn’t the place that’s made of candy,
It is nothing of beauty.
Everything’s dark purples and reds.
Most things lying on their deathbeds.
Apart from a few people,
Old and new friends; my guardian angels.
Jeroen, John, Tom and Umang.

Jeroen, a dear friend, almost brother like,
We met through a game called Counter Strike.
His timing is amazing. Always talks to me at my lowest times.
To always have him at my side I would give up lifetimes.

John already means so much to me,
I do not express it well enough for him to see.
In the last week he has kept me here,
Caught all of my figurative tears.

Umang, his words of kind harshness broke the spell,
He gave me his hand to help me out of my Hell.
Both clever and gorgeous, reminds me of Jeroen,
Always feels content to be around me
If only he could see.

Now it leaves Tom till last,
Our secret passion for one another was always a blast.
Well not so much of a secret, it was plain to see we suited.
We flirted which lead to my boyfriend being cheated.

These four men each play a powerful part of my life,
Each one in their, own way keeps me away from the knife.
Only one has had the pleasure of holding me in person,
As he is the only one to live in Britain.


SJ








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Re: my wonderland and guardian angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 04:09:19 PM AEST
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hey this is beautiful and you do mean so much to me


Re: my wonderland and guardian angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 01:47:53 AM AEST
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A truly beautiful piece of poetry.... Awesome write!


Re: my wonderland and guardian angels (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:26:01 AM AEST
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this was breathtakingly awesome, a brilliant write,

pixie xx


Re: my wonderland and guardian angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 01:25:54 PM AEST
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ive never had anyone write about me.....its a wonderful feeling...thanx....you do give me more credit than i deserve...

Love always,
Umang.




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