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The Day you Knew You'd Break My Heart
Contributed by
Kreeping_Beauty
on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 12:13:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I opened that book of dusty dreams
That has been pinned shut for months
And a picture of that day that you knew you’d break my heart
Picture perfect
The sky was blue, no clouds in sight
You were perfect
Your brain working over time to fix a plan to ruin my life
Seal it with a smile
That captured the surrounding darkness
Seal it with a kiss
That captured my heart
Now in a drain tied to that picture
Looks so pretty…
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2004-12-01 12:13:58]
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Re: The Day you Knew You'd Break My Heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 12:18:26 PM AEST
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you captired the feeling of heartache very well, this is amazingly written, beautiful
pixie xx |
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Re: The Day you Knew You'd Break My Heart
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 12:34:30 PM AEST
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| A heartbreak that remembers. I hope you fine love again and never have to worry about opening the book again.. really nice poem |
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