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Another Autumn
Contributed by
Noshin
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Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:41:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Here I stand alone in oblivion again
Gazing at the autumn leaves…
I witness them falling down one after another
Taking away with them all my dreams…
I crumple down the autumn leaves under my feet
Crush them to seek a redemption from my sufferings…
At last the leaves vanish away from the tree
Reminding me of my eternal pains…
Doesn’t that happen every autumn
Each falling leaf worsens my everlasting longings…
But autumns come n go every year
Brutally snatching away from me all my hopes…
And all I do is…standing alone in oblivion
Gazing at the autumn leaves…
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Noshin
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2004-12-01 11:41:49]
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Re: Another Autumn
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:43:02 AM AEST
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awwww this was so sad and lovely, you have such great expression and are a whizz at writing these Autumn poems :0
pixie xx |
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Re: Another Autumn
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by freckle on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 08:03:37 PM AEST
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| Good poem. I must admit though, I am an Autumn lover! Even though at my age I may look foolish stomping on those leaves.... : ) |
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