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Who Am I?
Contributed by
alexb
on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 09:36:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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No doubt here
Im no good
You should stay away
You really should
You rise above
All of the rest
I tried my hardest
I tried my best
And its me and you
Just stay away
You not them
Please dont stay
Who am I
If I cant accept you?
You are too
Good for me
Dont make a mistake
What do you see?
In the beginning
I needed you
But now I know
Just what to do
You deserve the best
More than I could ever give
Though Id give anything
Just to see you live
Who am I
If I cant accept you?
What will I
Do without you?
Why will I
Not believe you?
How will I
Live without you?
Who am I
If I cant accept you?
Stay away
Copyright ©
alexb
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2004-12-01 09:36:24]
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Re: Who Am I?
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by Dominick-Destruction on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:26:28 AM AEST
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My god, That was so emotional to read...You get the sence of wanting to reach out to you...But the words warn you to 'stay away'...
awsome.
xDDx |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by In2thetwilightzone on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 12:43:00 PM AEST
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| aw, that was a very strong decision you made there. weldone |
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