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Just one Chance
Contributed by
AllAlone
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Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 09:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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What have i done?
i thought i had paid my dues
even when i try i think what do i have to lose?
it's funny to find out just how much there is.
i made some mistakes, done things i regret, all i want is a chance, a new start, but those bad happenings find ways to pierce my heart.
I only just met you, and you already know all those damn things i bury deep in my soal, i wanted you to know me for what i really am not for what i did in my past
everyone knows what i do before i, and if not, they let me know how horrible am i? i only want a chance to make it all up, to be a new person and make it up i am different now, smarter and wiser, why oh God why do they listen to those lies
Please, just give me a chance.
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2002-11-24 21:30:00]
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Re: Just one Chance
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 03:11:06 AM AEST
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| I hope they give you the chance to prove your self! Good write! Christina |
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Re: Just one Chance
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by OreO on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 04:37:21 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful i hope
they see this and give you that
chance. Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Just one Chance
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by Eloise on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 08:18:38 PM AEST
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| this is a beautiful poem... |
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