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I'll Just Close MY Eyes
Contributed by
aggressive
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Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 02:06:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I値l Just Close My Eyes
I値l just close my eyes,
And I値l see you face
I値l hear your laugh; I値l see your smile,
I値l feel your warm embrace.
I値l carry in my memories
Until the day I die
The smell of your hair
The softness of you skin
And the love in your eyes
The lord was calling you
It was time for you to go
You loved us all so much
I promise you we know
There was an empty spot in gods garden
So he took you there to stay
Because of the blood of Jesus
I値l see you there someday
But until then
When my heart cries
When I want to see you
I値l just close my eyes
A Poem
By Sandra Baker
Copyright ﾂｩ
aggressive
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2004-12-01 02:06:19]
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Re: I'll Just Close MY Eyes
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 06:15:02 AM AEST
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Ohh Sandra im so sorry for yuor loss, this is such a sad beautiful poem. Writen with so much feeling and depth, she'll be so pround and happy to see this in heaven.
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Re: I'll Just Close MY Eyes
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:03:05 AM AEST
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My condolescences during your bereavement in regards to the passing of your mother.
You write with such positivity and I feel that missing you feeling.
Your poem is a wonderful tribute to her.
Keep writing.
High praise for your poem and may you find comfort in writing.
Kie |
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Re: I'll Just Close MY Eyes
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by NightOwl on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 03:48:40 PM AEST
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This poem is awesome. The fondness and love that you have for this person is clearly reflected and very tangible. I can really relate... it's awesome that you have such strong faith. Great work, and God Bless.
Jane |
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