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Problems around me
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 01:05:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The problems around
that i deal with everyday
I still know myself well
and know where I want to Go
The situations I've dealt with over and over
All the pain
All the times I was easily expendable
yet I dealt with what's at hand
not wishing my life away
wishing the one I love would stay
Peace and hope
JENNI
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2004-12-01 01:05:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Problems around me
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 01:12:07 AM AEST (User
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Very wise write.
We need more of this.
A masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Problems around me
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 01:35:40 AM AEST (User
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Aww Jenni this is so good, a very wise poem.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Problems around me
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 05:15:48 AM AEST (User
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excellently composed Jenni. a great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: Problems around me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:09:38 AM AEST (User
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in the words of simon cowell. "distinctly average." |
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Re: Problems around me
(User Rating: 1 ) by UnlovedChild on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 11:29:20 PM AEST (User
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Aww Jenni how sweet!!! Great write. All you need is you to be the best you can be! Never give up. Love ya! |
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