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i dream in colors left unseen
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:24:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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i dream in colors blue and green sugar coated in between, a creation of a sunny sonet,just an un touched precious moment.
i dwell in colors black and red of passions and nightmares left unspoken,feelings forgoten smothered and broken.
i sing to music gothic and celt,inside my worries wither and melt and im left thinking of what i felt, listening to the rythm im on my feet, dancing frantically to every beat.
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Re: i dream in colors left unseen
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:51:25 AM AEST (User
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Cool poem Brit. I liked this one. Especially this part: Listening to the rhythm I'm on my feet, dancing frantically to every beat. Great line. Makes me think of how healing it is to be at a Dead show and dance your arse off. Such a great release of tension and stress.
Much peace Laura |
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