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letter on a gravestone
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 10:46:10 PM in AEST
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Letter on a gravestone
To a person I once knew.
Lying cold beneath the ground.
To this person I once knew.
You put yourself there safe and sound.
We could have lived a happy life.
Possibly been together forever.
We should have lived a happy life.
I will not forgive you, NEVER!
You tore my heart and you tore yours too.
Another Romeo and Juliet love song.
You broke my heart... maybe I broke yours too.
That faitfull day when it all went wrong.
You died right there, coffin, they closed the lid.
I'd stand there crying forever if I could.
I died there also, coffin, they close my heart.
I'll bleed here for you, I know I should.
My blood on this letter.
Placed here on your grave.
This poison burns my lip.
Died here on your grave.
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Re: letter on a gravestone
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:08:07 PM AEST
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beautifiul poem
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Re: letter on a gravestone
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:08:21 PM AEST
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Wow...I hope your ex-bfs sister is alright. That really has to suck. It was an awesome write...and must have been awfully hard to write about.
stay strong
~*hugz* Marissa |
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Re: letter on a gravestone
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:55:13 PM AEST
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| great poem. the flow of it is beautiful. i hope your ex-boyfriend's sister doing better. |
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Re: letter on a gravestone
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 05:51:17 AM AEST
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this is such a powerfill write, its giving me goose pimples.
Hugs,
Jane |
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