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Time
Contributed by
smileyz07
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 10:01:57 PM in AEST
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oops
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Time slips through fingers,
Disappearing into a darkness,
As lives are lived in vain.
Wishes are made,
Lost love is found,
Broken friendships are mended.
Yet through all this,
One question remains answered by only dreamers,
"Can we pass the test of time?"
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smileyz07
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2004-11-30 22:01:57]
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Re: Time
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 10:47:33 PM AEST
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Welcome and great write.
One never knows but in time.Awesome!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Time
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:09:12 PM AEST
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I agree with emy - welcome! I like your poem. The truly amazing poems come from the heart. Keep writing, because I'd sure like to see more work from you ^_^
---Ryu |
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Re: Time
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:09:18 PM AEST
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| Great write! Welcome to the site, and I'm looking forward to more of your poetry. |
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