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anger, hate, hurt
Contributed by
karmen
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:02:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Anger, Hate , and hurt are all I feel
but I'm not sure why right now
I love so many people and things
but I only feel those three, I'm not sure how
The anger hurts
and makes me cry
I want it to go away
I want it to die
I hurt the people I love
because I tell them things so mean
that I know I shouldn't
myself being happy, I've never seen
The hate is even worse
It over rules any love I could ever feel
I wish it all away
I dont know how to deal
And once again it hurts those people
I feel so bad
And awful, that i cant control this
I'm always so sad....
And thats where the hurt comes in
The way I hurt myself is by hurting those people I love
I need to fix this
I just need someone to help me, give me a little shove
I hope and pray
that the anger, hate, and hurt leave
I think they will one day go away
I guess I'll just wait and see.....
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karmen
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Re: anger, hate, hurt
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:05:44 PM AEST
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Nicceee Karmen. I really like it, and one day, hopefully soon, you will overcome these feelings. =)
stay strong
~ Marissa |
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Re: anger, hate, hurt
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:07:59 PM AEST
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You should go to your family Dr. and he cann help u. I had a nervous disorder due to a medical condition that could only be helped by medication.
It's probably not the reason u have the anger but medication can help u cope so u can deal with it.
luv, huggs, hope,
emy
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Re: anger, hate, hurt
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 09:10:19 PM AEST
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| great write. interesting rhyme scheme. keep your chin up =] |
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