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I Love You
Contributed by
xxDeathxTOxKristixx
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:18:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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i think of all the times i sat in my room and cried
' i can't wait to leave - grow up - move out '
it all seems so idealic
now its looming and i want to run, so afraid
so petrified of life
scares me so much i want to hide
deep under my covers
which have always protected me from
monsters - the dark
myself
so what do i do now? where do i go? who do i see?
i'll miss you all...
yes you...
who made me cry who made me laugh
who made me despise myself
love myself be myself
and anyone but myself...
this will be my last hurrah
for what will distinguish me from the billions now?
nothing except my face
so easily forgotten...
i turn unseen towards those i hate,
whispering...
I Love You...
Copyright ©
xxDeathxTOxKristixx
... [
2004-11-30 19:18:34]
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Re: I Love You
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by Sassy on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:19:57 PM AEST
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| That is so good, it shows a lot of feeling! |
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Re: I Love You
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:42:26 PM AEST
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A very deep great write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: I Love You
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by sughy on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:47:14 PM AEST
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| Very, very, very good poem! You explained every emotion so deeply. This is exactly how I'm feeling at the moment. Thank for sharing. (I rated this a 5!) |
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Re: I Love You
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 09:16:16 PM AEST
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| yeah, i can relate. =] |
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