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The same four walls
Contributed by
deathly_rose
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:14:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In this empty room so lonely,
is where all of my thoughts are kept,
away from this world they shall stay,
never to reek havoc among the civilization.
Everyday it’s the same four walls,
The same idea, day in and day out.
This world is closing, it’s soon coming to an end,
All of this hatred within me, is consuming my body.
Scars may show, but feelings will not,
That is what all of these people have taught.
I don’t know what I have done wrong,
And how long it’s been going on.
Shadows of my remnant past,
Hinder the light upon those walls,
Casting a dark figure,
A figure of past dismay.
I don’t know how much longer this will last,
How much longer these walls will stand,
But in the end it won’t matter,
It’s still the same four walls, just broken.
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2004-11-30 19:14:58]
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Re: The same four walls
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by daydreamer22 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:58:43 PM AEST
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good job...i hate having the feeling of being locked away in thought or reality...either way i kno wut ya mean
Awaiting your next...
~*ME*~ |
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Re: The same four walls
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 09:18:00 PM AEST
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| great write. written well. |
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Re: The same four walls
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 07:26:59 AM AEST
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*tear*
awww, I like dis poem, your so good at writing these tings
*~givingin~* |
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