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In my dreams
Contributed by
necronomy
on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 05:30:00 PM in AEST
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I had a dream of you last night,
And though we were so close,
So distant you remained
And there was sadness swallowed hard,
And courage when you looked the other way,
It was not a goodbye,
More reconciled ‘hi’,
We would speak not of our past,
Both wishing this encounter to last,
But at the same time we’d made up our minds,
That it was the time,
To say goodbye,
And part on our good terms,
Remembering these hard lessons we’ve learned
Bittersweet and sad,
Swallow hard,
I’m sorry,
It will never be the same,
Ever again
Copyright ©
necronomy
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2002-11-24 17:30:00]
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Re: In my dreams
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 07:20:48 PM AEST
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Lovely write....
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Re: In my dreams
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by OreO on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 03:32:58 AM AEST
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It's good that two people can
part on good terms. It definately is
a lesson learned, this is a sad write
Thanks for sharing this one it brought
tears to my eyes. Beautiful write!
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Re: In my dreams
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 11:18:45 PM AEST
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Captured. From the first word. I couldn't take my eyes away. Speechless. Wow. Awesome. Keep them coming.
YS |
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Re: In my dreams
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by Sarah22 on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 01:25:39 AM AEST
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| amazing ;*) |
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Re: In my dreams
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by thorns on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 02:56:34 AM AEST
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| evokes a feeling of sadness. well-written. |
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Re: In my dreams
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by roisin on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 11:03:56 PM AEST
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how true in life..someone once said to me, "we'll never not be friends"...and is it not, so sad that, " it will never be the same, ever again." as you have said....yes, so very sad when one loses someone very special.....a very good write
ta
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Re: In my dreams
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 12:05:29 AM AEST
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| wow, this one sends chills....speaks of sadness and acceptance....great write |
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