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Cherry Blood Bath
Contributed by
PsychoScissors
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 06:09:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My lipstick melts upon my self,
In it's wake the color blood,
across my self it drips a line
of what I am and what I was
Flowing like a cherry stream
If I try to take a drink,
will I come out the same again?
I'll lay inside a blood bath
A blood bath tainted cherry
Washing away what what's wanted
scrubing on more stains.
A few more stains, my cherry blood bath
cannot wash away....
Copyright ©
PsychoScissors
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2004-11-30 18:09:29]
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Re: Cherry Blood Bath
(User Rating: 1 )
by daydreamer22 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 06:31:33 PM AEST
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i enjoyed reading this...i like how it has a deeper meaning...or at least i think it does..who knows i could be wrong but im pretty sure im not...hehe
Awaiting your next...
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Re: Cherry Blood Bath
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by sicknivesevered on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 06:34:42 PM AEST
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lol - your username is ***** great! ^^
Anyway... for some reason my mind instantly obtained fantastic visuals from this poem. Beautiful and dark. I liked it! (^_^)v |
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Re: Cherry Blood Bath
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:01:19 PM AEST
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this is really good i liked it alot...great work
Lots of Love
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