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my little lie
Contributed by
angel_facing_judgement
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:21:23 PM in AEST
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underneath the makeup and perfume, there lies a secret me still unknown to you.
i am alive and yet ive died,and its like this every day. i try to change but end up insane
and in the end i lay slain.
so i hide this from you, afraid that you'll leave, because losing you is the worst thing i see
so inside i hide i live and i deal with myself to keep you believing my little lie
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Re: my little lie
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by AdamChantell on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:50:03 PM AEST
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| i liked the rhyme scheme on this. great write! |
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Re: my little lie
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 09:27:41 PM AEST
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| good write. everyone lies, it just matters what about |
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Re: my little lie
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 09:06:50 AM AEST
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Don't we all have these? The worst lies are those we tell ourselves.
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Re: my little lie
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 06:30:00 PM AEST
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Angel facing judgment
Aaaaaaaaaaah you found out and I thought noone knew. Cool poem filled with untold truth. : )
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