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Slur
Contributed by
CodyJ
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 03:59:17 PM in AEST
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oops
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Another round goes down
without a sound I pound
some more liquor
not sure what it's for.
It's all I recall
the call then the fall
to the floor a little more
of a whore and I'll pour
myself a drink to that.
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CodyJ
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2004-11-30 15:59:17]
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Re: Slur
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:45:07 PM AEST
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| LOL! Oh man, this is great, Nice job! |
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Re: Slur
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 11:00:45 PM AEST
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*Smiles slyly*
As a drinker myself, I too, can recall some rather drunken moments, most similar to this.
An excellent short piece.
Amusing and nostalgic. |
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