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You're Dead To Me
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 03:49:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Do you hear that you are dead to me,
As I watched you die I danced with glee,
I laughed when you fell from your pedestal,
I knew I’d be the one to see you into hell.
Now you’re there your hell is my happiness,
I know me & Mark don’t deserve anything less,
It kills you each time that we smile,
It makes it just that little bit more worthwhile.
You thought you would destroy us & win,
You didn’t count on me having thick skin,
I always get back up when I’ve been knocked down,
Never will anything keep me on the ground.
I will never cry a tear for you now you are gone,
Nor will I sing in your wake a sad, sad song,
I will drink & be merry, carry on with my life,
Finally I can put down my befriended knife.
I know that one day you will rise again,
Throw my way all sorts of pain,
But I will be ready on that you can count,
Because once again I will win & cast you out.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-30 15:49:56]
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Re: You're Dead To Me
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by In2thetwilightzone on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 03:54:35 PM AEST
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| good girl. brilliant write |
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Re: You're Dead To Me
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:11:46 PM AEST
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Wicked.
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Re: You're Dead To Me
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 05:18:24 PM AEST
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awesome write... I found this inspiring oddly
enough I don't know if it was intended to be
however. I loved how it ended.
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Re: You're Dead To Me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 01:35:15 AM AEST
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omg!! don't mess with pixie! great write anger well expressed.
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Re: You're Dead To Me
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 05:50:10 AM AEST
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| Damn hun I love this one here...Bad ass write very in depth.. |
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Re: You're Dead To Me
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:31:20 AM AEST
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Bravo! Kick butt. It is a good feeling to see you taking care of yourself so well.
Shows gumption, and strength, Great write
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Re: You're Dead To Me
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:31:17 PM AEST
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| Wow. very emotional and touching write. Strongly expressed, can feel the anger |
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