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Have you ever .. ?
Contributed by
kaosar
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 03:36:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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have you ever lost your self ?
where did you find it then ?
can you please tell me :
where do lost selves hide ?
and why do they leave us this way ?
have you ever felt like being hitten on your head ?
or having some one wake you up ?
have you ever looked at the mirror
and just saw a blank ?
have you ever felt like running as fast as you can
or screaming as loud as you can ?
what did you do then ?
can you please tell me !!
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Re: Have you ever .. ?
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by In2thetwilightzone on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 03:40:06 PM AEST
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| odd. but yes i have felt like that before. ae you a teen? its all hormonal imbalances, trust me, im on a tight rope when it comes to balancing these emotions. |
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Re: Have you ever .. ?
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:10:01 PM AEST
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This is great Kaosar, I can relate to this one, I lose ME all the time!*smiles*
I think you do wonderful job........do you have translate into to English too?
I can just see myself trying to do that in your language..........I'd be lost for sure!!!!
Welcome Aboard Kaosar............You will love YPDC...........we are very kind to one another here, and we are glad to have you with us!
Keep up the good work.
Warm Love,
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Re: Have you ever .. ?
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:53:54 PM AEST
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i think it is just amazing how you have made the translations, the feeling and everything comes across beautifully, hmm.. in answer to your question, what i do is sleep a long time then the world seems brighter:) hugs n' love nessa
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