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without words
Contributed by
helluvaboy
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 03:28:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i have Walked! so quickly
that
i tripped on
Yesterday.
i have Jumped! so high
that
i bumped my head on
Tomorrow.
but; i have never ran
fastenough to catch
Today
on my shoe
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helluvaboy
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2004-11-30 15:28:03]
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Re: without words
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by fielding88 on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 10:35:48 AM AEST
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| This had a good message in it, no matter the length. It was a nice little poem i liked it. |
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Re: without words
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by cherrycoke on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:45:12 AM AEST
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if this tends to be your writing style then i think you would be a great children's poet. haha it'd be funny if you already were ..............
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