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Run on Sentence
Contributed by
zenmind
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 02:03:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Run on sentence
I've never been able to get this right.
There always seems to be barriers to break down.
Then after all of the struggling,
you find broken pieces lying in a particular order.
"A poem", I say.
I don't know what else to call it.
But something within me knows no poetry.
There is no genius within this mess.
Only a starry eyed broken boned madman, with his eyes set on the sun.
Open, he becomes blind,
and all distinctions of vision fall into one stream of light.
And we call it poetry.
The continuous stream, illuminating questions,
and leaving a blank stare after.
Ah! this moment, this is the point.
The blank stare, no insight, no judgement,
pure conciousness.
It is the mind gap covering any explanation.
There are no words to describe what is there.
It is the point where thinking fails, and we are left with
.................
a moment...........
undisturbed and capturing
Copyright ©
zenmind
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2004-11-30 14:03:25]
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Re: Run on Sentence
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by FleurdeSang on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 02:55:57 PM AEST
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First off: WELCOME BACK!!! MISSED YOUUU!!
I finally got that out, lol. Incredible piece, dearest zenmind!! Pure genious, genuine perfection. A beautiful first post. Hope you are well, and life isn't being too harsh. ; ) So glad you are back! I expect to see many submissions from you, Mister Zenmind. lol. I kid with you, my friend. Much love and welcome back. Nothing less than exquisite from you, zenmind, as always! Forever,
Your friend,
FleurdeSang *Stephy* |
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Re: Run on Sentence
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 05:47:11 PM AEST
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| this is great, I love it! |
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Re: Run on Sentence
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 05:47:12 PM AEST
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| this is great, I love it! |
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