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ive lost the sense...
Contributed by
In2thetwilightzone
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:39:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The Sense
ive lost the sense,
the sense from deep within,
that keeps my clock ticking,
keeps my lips in grin,
ive lost the sense,
the sense of love and lust,
the sense to find someone like me,
the sense to know who to trust,
ive lost the sense,
the sense to conceal the tear,
to block the germs,
ive lost the sense to even care
theres so many things my sense dosnt detect,
theres so many holes,
my souls a defect,
if only you would grow as deep,
but i cannot change you as you are who you are...
but your the best ive got...
if only you wern't so childish and you were the man you appear to be when we are alone,
if only i could understand,
why im being used as the dogs bone...
jazz
jazz13697@hotmail.com
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Re: ive lost the sense...
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by Dri on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:59:37 PM AEST
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| such a good write! great emotion *hugs* |
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Re: ive lost the sense...
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by In2thetwilightzone on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 02:25:34 PM AEST
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| thx!!!!!!!!!!!! ill read sum of urs!!!!!!!!!!!!! xxxx |
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Re: ive lost the sense...
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:10:30 PM AEST
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This poem is so good ! i can totally relate being i am around the same age ! I once had a guy play with my heart and i did feel like the "dog's bone" as you put it ... i hope you find another guy who will treat you better ! anyway , good job !
*~*luckie-Lynn*~* |
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Re: ive lost the sense...
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by In2thetwilightzone on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 01:26:07 AM AEST
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| thankyou!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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