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I Put You In Your Grave
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:44:20 AM in AEST
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I put you in your grave,
There was nothing of you left to save,
You weren’t you any more,
You had rotted right through your core.
No more were you the innocent girl,
That around her finger men you could twirl,
But you were now a heartless killer,
A real psycho a real bone chiller.
What happened to make you go this way?
You always said you’d make the bastards pay,
You waited for your revenge, your anger boiled,
A lovely young woman it spoiled.
She died a long time ago you said,
For years you had wanted her dead,
You’d often wish for this & now it’s been granted,
Your outlook on sanity had always been slanted.
The scars you had to bare became just too much,
Out of reality you finally lost touch,
You thought of nothing but darkness & of death,
I killed you because there was nothing of you left.
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pixie
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Re: I Put You In Your Grave
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by givingin on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:51:17 AM AEST
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Oh pixie,
this is very powerful, I like this poem!
*MUAH*
*~givingin~* |
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Re: I Put You In Your Grave
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:51:19 AM AEST
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pix you are the darkest of dark when it comes to writing dark stuff! another blood curdler well done!
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Re: I Put You In Your Grave
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:08:13 PM AEST
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haunting.... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I Put You In Your Grave
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by In2thetwilightzone on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:21:50 PM AEST
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| did you seriously kill anyone? well done |
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Re: I Put You In Your Grave
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:34:36 PM AEST
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Nicely written. But would really hate to lose you.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: I Put You In Your Grave
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by EternalNight4x on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:52:24 PM AEST
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| poweful write and well written...keep it up |
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Re: I Put You In Your Grave
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:09:53 PM AEST
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pixie once again u have written an excellent poem....great work....i loved it
Lots of Love
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Re: I Put You In Your Grave
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by Dominick-Destruction on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:38:58 AM AEST
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'You thought of nothing but darkness & of death,
I killed you because there was nothing of you left. '
...those last lines...just wow!!!!
xDDx |
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Re: I Put You In Your Grave
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:40:00 AM AEST
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A powerful write. Whether that was a negative part of youself, or breaking away from someone else in their self destructive focus, it is a breaking away from something really negative ...... good going
Potent write
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Re: I Put You In Your Grave
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:41:42 PM AEST
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I see mental images of Tolkien's Gollum. Two personalities, vying for control of one entity. The dark one lost.
Another great write pixie.
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