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It's Not, I'm not
Contributed by
anonymous_skies
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:11:35 AM in AEST
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Don’t just read me like words on paper
Open your mind and hear my plea
I’m singing, don’t you see?
Don’t just skim me like graffiti on the wall
Reach out—this heart is warm, beating
I’m praying, don’t you see?
Don’t just scroll me like scribbles on the monitor
Kiss me, taste the sourness (it’s not ink)
I’m slipping, don’t you see?
Don’t just read me
Like I’m some poem or verse
I’m breathing--
You can't see.
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anonymous_skies
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2004-11-30 11:11:35]
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Re: It's Not, I'm not
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by imalive_enoughsaid on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:27:52 AM AEST
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| wow...i like this one alot i know what you mean about writing your soul and not being seen beyond the surface.some people dont REALLY read what you wrote but i did and it was beautiful. excellent write , keep up the good work |
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Re: It's Not, I'm not
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:02:41 PM AEST
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Read between my lines and see me. great poem loved it.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: It's Not, I'm not
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 11:08:32 PM AEST
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Some don't understand, 'tis true enough... ah, but there are those who do. Few they are... but when they happen upon a write of yours and comment in a way that makes it clear they understand - it's a wickedly good moment.
I like this a lot. Funny though... I've always sort of felt the opposite. Sometimes, I swear, I exist more in the write than in so called "real life"... it is, I think, only possible to know/see me by reading me "Like I'm some poem or verse". Interesting that we see it differently.
Thanks for sharing this... you got me thinkin'!
~SNM~ |
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Re: It's Not, I'm not
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by ShadowDaughter on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 08:56:19 PM AEST
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Ooooh.
*grins* *loves* *really really a lot* Especially the line-
Kiss me, taste the sourness (it’s not ink)
Great, wonderful, too-much-like-something-I-would-think-but-not-be-able-to-write-this-well sort of poem.
Lots of non-sweet, non-chewy candy to you^^.
--meeee |
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