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I'm giving up
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 10:17:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm giving up
But you bug me
Repeating it over and over
It'll come back in time
You tell me to at least work it
But its really frustrating
But you wouldn't know
You keep pushing
I scream "Whats the point"
Tears in my eyes
I walk out the door
I drop too my knees and look up
God I've prayed and prayed
My will to work it is about dry
God forgive me
I've lost my faith please forgive me
I'm giving up
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Re: I'm giving up
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:27:05 PM AEST
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Can relate to this one.
Yes Wonderful poem know how ya feel
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Re: I'm giving up
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:29:00 PM AEST
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n this world theres never a good enough exscuse to just give up,please dont give up,ur still young,theres way more to life besides getten hurt and fustrated then given up,theres things such as the world around u the people who love u the people who u love,if u were just to give up how would ur bday turn out?it'd probably turn out pretty dam bad,great poem.it was good,no worries everyone goes throught his stage,keep up the great work!!
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