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Hatred
Contributed by
MasterWeasel
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:09:26 AM in AEST
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I hate those who are always happy
Who are always kind and always sappy
Those who laugh those who cry
Those who live and those who die
Those who whisper those who shout
Those within and those without
Those whose love I've never known
Those whose anger has never shown
Those who love to please the crowd
Those who sit upon a cloud
Those with beauty all so grand
Those who seek to hold their hand
Those who know me those who don't
Those who care and those who won't
Those that seek andthose who shun
Those who stay and those who run
Those Who give me no respect
I hate them all to great effect
Those whose life was always well
Who simply watched me as I fell
Those who will not go away
Who mock me every single day
Those who hate to be ignored
Those who live on their own accord
I don't know why but I hate them all
Now it's their turn to take a fall
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Re: Hatred
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by skraggs on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:16:56 AM AEST
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| hahahaha man thats badass! this is a most excellent write! |
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Re: Hatred
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:20:08 AM AEST
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Sure you didn't leave anyone out?
Nice use of rhyme.
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Re: Hatred
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by EternalNight4x on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:56:50 PM AEST
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| great write haha I think that means you hate everyone lol well I'm like that sometimes..anyways excellent write |
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Re: Hatred
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 02:17:02 PM AEST
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Very well written I hate them all to may they all get their just rewards. And see this hell they made for me in their own life. GREAT WRITE
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Hatred
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by Live2Die on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:58:15 AM AEST
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| Great...amazing....Just take a second, and consider why you hate them all. Trust me, most of them you shouldn't waste your time hating....and a few others...well, you may just LIKE them if you think about it. But you have to open up. You have to let people care, and show that you care back. It's the only way. Awesome write tho, very well written. |
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Re: Hatred
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by pixie on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:27:06 AM AEST
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I'd say that you hold alot of anger inside you, but this is the best way of releasing it, as I have found out, being quite an angry person myself lol good write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Hatred
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by Deathly_Rose on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 03:51:24 PM AEST
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very explainitory, and very clear...
people who are like that are far too unreal.. i hae the way that they talk about you behind your back and arent stong enough to tell it to your face.... and those who laugh at your pain because they dont understand what eal pain is
*~Alicia~* |
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