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The petls of the rose

Contributed by Deathly_Rose on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:11:04 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



The petals of the rose, in which you gave me,
Once were so red, when our love was true.
These petals have been falling , can’t you see,
our love has been failing, all these days, through and through.

As I look at the petals amongst the ground,
I realize, this symbolizes our love, our lust.
Our love will not be restored, nor found,
the anger inside of me, the pain within me, has made me lose trust.

Trust in myself, trust in you,
All of these thoughts keep coming back,
the thoughts of me and you, together as one, leaning against that wall so blue.
These petals are turning now, from red to black.

This pain is all around me, I’m giving up hope.
Those words that you said to me, once felt so true,
but all of those lies in which you had told, is making it hard to cope.
I need to spread my wings, go to a better place, it’s about time that I flew.

Away from this place is where I shall end,
My love will no longer be,
Those words I shall never speak again.





Copyright © Deathly_Rose ... [ 2004-11-30 07:11:04]
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Re: The petls of the rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampyre_BloodWraith on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:19:41 AM AEST
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a rose resembles love but also resembles heartbreak, falling petals the tears we bleed when love becomes a lie.
A sad poem this one, really felt what you were describing, its hard to deal with heartbreak, have seen many fall into this trap...but have been powerless to stop the fall.
Beautiful poem, hope you find the love you really deserve.


Re: The petls of the rose (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:25:59 AM AEST
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aWWWW,
I really liked this poem alicia,
MUAH!

*~givingin~*


Re: The petls of the rose (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:08:03 AM AEST
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awww that was so sad and so very beautiful,

pixie xx




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