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And you cry for me
Contributed by
lunartune
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 06:07:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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And you cried for me.
I lay here cuddling up with my knife,
I lay here cutting at my dwindling life,
You can tell me that i have something to live for,
but I just can't see,
You tell me I'm somebody special,
you tell me I'm me,
I can't feel anything,
I'm numb to the pain,
I can't be anyone,
I don't have a name,
You cry for me,
and I die for me,
You tried to see,
why I didn't want to be,
and you cried for me.
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lunartune
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2004-11-30 06:07:34]
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Re: And you cry for me
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by Vampyre_BloodWraith on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 06:28:04 AM AEST
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Cool write, many feel as you do, but until you see what it is they see ....nothing we say or do will change your belief in yourself, Im not being harsh, I know how you feel...but what can I say that would change the way you feel...nothing.
Cool ryme vivid images painted written with feeling and strength. |
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Re: And you cry for me
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by my_pain_my_sorrows on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 06:56:55 AM AEST
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| hey, i really like this, it really meant something to me, i use to feel like this all the time, but i never truly knew why, but then i became a lttle happier, and eventualy got over that stage, but now i'm falling back into the same state. i have lost my guide and the way is dark, maybe you and i can can guide each other. x x x |
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Re: And you cry for me
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:09:50 AM AEST
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very deep, can feel your pain through this write,
pixie xx |
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