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A Poem for A Shattered Heart
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:50:41 PM in AEST
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How could you feel unpretty?
When the truth is that you are very
With such kindness in your eyes and heart
How could you feel so torn apart?
Who would do this to you?
And make you feel that way
Who could do this to angel?
Make you hurt so much
That you can’t drive the tears away
Teas and taunt you and make you fear touch
Steal your heart away and then leave
Love you one day and then make you greave
Make you feel wanted then kill what you believe
How could you feel unpretty?
When the truth is that you are very
With such kindness in your eyes and heart
How could you feel so torn apart?
How can I help put the pieces back in place?
How can I help bring a smile to your face?
If I can do anything let me know
Tell me what you want to see
And that is what I will show
How could they use you in their games?
And fill your life with so much shame
You are really very kind
And your true beauty brightly shines
It is your soul and it reflects in all your words
Powerful, beautiful, brilliant, and very sad
Tormented but still great words
How could you be made to feel so bad?
That I will never know
How could some one ever
Shatter your precious heart
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Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart
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by Vampyre_BloodWraith on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:11:04 AM AEST
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The answer to how could they, simple its because they can.
Until people change their ways this world is just going to carry on going downhill.
Beautiful poem by the way. |
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Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:30:06 AM AEST
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| know what's beautiful dorien...you. The fact that you want to repair a tender, shattered heart and make it all better..fix someone's boo-boo..That's what I find incredible and lovable and beautiful.. |
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Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart
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by kyletycz on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:33:26 AM AEST
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nice poem, i liked it alot, you could use a little spell checking though, just for future references, nice write
l8r
Ninja Tycz |
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Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:40:55 AM AEST
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this is amazing,
thank you.................. |
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Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:15:19 AM AEST
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awww that was sweet, very nice write, awwww lol
pixie xx |
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Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart
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by shattered_heart on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:15:17 PM AEST
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I love it. Thankyou...(tear) lol :) You just made my day so much brighter...
- Rachelle |
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Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart
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by WildfireRose on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:18:44 PM AEST
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| very nice...wish more people were like you |
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Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart
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by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:01:44 AM AEST
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| vaympre_Blood said it. How could they because they can, because they can use you for their own pleasure and nothing more. I also agree w/ autumngreeneyes. You wanting to peice a shattered heart back together is awesome, thanks*. Great write. |
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