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Daddy

Contributed by JaimeStar on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 10:32:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Daddy what happened
Everythings a mess.
Daddy what happened
You used to be the best.
Daddy what happened
Your turning into a man I don't know.
Daddy what happened
Oops! You dropped your bag of snow.
Daddy what happened
Your always on edge.
Daddy what happened
This is your third day in bed.
Daddy what happened
How come i'm not your little girl anymore?
Daddy what happened
What is that pipe for?
Daddy what happened
Why are you acting so mean?
Daddy what happened
Mommy told me you are a crackphene.
Daddy what happened
Your tearing our family apart.
Daddy what happened
You seem to have no heart.
Daddy what happened
You never were this way.
Daddy what happened
What do you have to say?
Daddy what happened
I don't think I love you anymore.
Daddy what happened
My heart is now very sore.
Daddy what happened
Where have you gone?
Daddy what happened
Daddy? Daddy?
Daddy's gone.....

Copyright © JaimeStar ... [ 2004-11-29 22:32:00]
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Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampyre_BloodWraith on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:29:36 AM AEST
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Different style yet a cool write, showing a life gone awry through the effect of drugs on lives.

Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:17:31 AM AEST
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Well I liked it sad but very well done! Christina

Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 06:44:54 PM AEST
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Jaime this poem kicks butt! you really expressed your feelings well here, and thats what good poetry's all about. I LOVE YA! and i hope things start to look up for u and ur dad soon. U RULE!

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